RATE SHINY UMBREONS TEAM! (please)

Here we go, my team.

Shiny Umbreon: evd in hp/spdef
Dusknoir: evd in hp/def, move known-pain split'
Vaporeon: evd in hp/spatk, moves know-surf, aurora beam
Gliscor: evd in spd/atk, moves-fire fang
Metagross: evd in atk/hp
Slowking: evd in spatk/hp, move know-trick room

please rate, improve, make suggestions, or just hate(hopefully not this option)

It'd be a lot more helpful if if knew all the moves your Pokemon know.

i don't know the moves yet, because this is a future team that i haven't fully developed yet.
if you want to put your input in, feel free

Well first thing I notice is Vaporeon using aurora beam. Change that to Ice Beam.
And second, I reccomend Ice Fang over Fire Fang for Gliscor.

the reason i have gliscor having a fire move is because that defeats the trouble ice types for him and the pesky grass types on vaporeon

get more type variety

you should get some faster sweepers

the shiny umbreon shoulda been Ev in HP and def. since its spdef is already so high. not bad though

archmage1991 wrote:the shiny umbreon shoulda been Ev in HP and def. since its spdef is already so high. not bad though

I agree

vaporeon should lose aurura beam and i dont think u should u trick room. not a lot of bigger attackers. umbreon just sucks at atk and spatk. gliscor isnt that strong either. im thinking that if an opponent had a lucario or something after a sword dance, they could sweep ur team, besides the metagross, assuming it knows eq and has strong ev investment in def.

can you list all the moves of the pokemon?

I have actually totally redone my team, only keeping two of the pokemon from that team..

Umbreon: ?,?,?,?
Vaporeon: ice beam/aurora beam, hydro pump, surf, ?
Sceptile: frenzy plant, ?, ?, ?
Snorlax: rest, earthquake, snore/sleep talk, ?
Salamence: ?,?,?,?
Charizard: fly, fire move(like frenzy plant & hydro cannon, don't know name), ?,?

1. For umbreon a good set is: protect wish yawn payback
2. For vaporeon take out aurora beam because you already have ice beam and also take out either hydro pump or surf because you only need 1 water type move you could give it shadow ball or yawn or substitute
3. For sceptile: grass knot, dragon pulse, leafstorm and focus blast
4. For snorlax it seems like you want a rest talker: rest, sleeptalk, earthquake, bodyslam and don't use SNORE
5. For a good salamence set: dragondance, earthquake, outrage(or dragonclaw), fire blast (or stoneedge but fire blast handles steel types)
6. For charizard use: flamethrower, focus blast, dragon pulse, and airslash

ok, that sounds good. except for 1 thing.

umbreon was caught shiny, so it can't learn wish

but those movesets sound good
this is a double battle team, what would you pair with what?

on a side note:
"millions of years ago the alien Xenu, collected all his people
and then, he threw them around a volcano bringing bombs in his
machines. And blew them all to smithereens!"

oh a double battle team well i'm not that good with doubles

ok. that's fine, i still need advice

i finally got a treecko iv bred (somewhat)

here are my choices:
1) lonely 0/29/11/20/28/30
2) relaxed 13/29/3/21/13/24
3) calm 13/22/11/30/15
4) serious 15/6/17/29/19/17

tell me which one i should choose!

lonely if leaf blade is a physical move

use the lonely natured one

Then, since i am going to use the lonely treecko, what would you say i should use for moveset?

choices are:

leaf blade
frenzy plant
night slash (move relearner)
x-scissor
leaf storm
synthesis
outrage

I'd go:

Leaf blade
X-scissor
Dragon claw (or outrage)
Leaf storm (since it's a spatk move and lowers spatk not atk)

is dragon claw an egg move?

I think you can use a tm

ok, i will see if i have the tm!

And i have a snorlax! i don't have the ivs at the moment, but i do need moveset choices.
i don't have options for you, but thoughts are appreciated

i have one move on it, curse

tell me what you think, please

Dragon claw is tm 02 I think.

Snorlax:

Curse
Bodyslam
Earthquake
Crunch

but what about the whole rest/sleep talk move set?