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Post by jokerx2x2 Sun Jul 11, 2010 9:31 am

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Post by adoxography Sun Jul 11, 2010 10:41 am

I like it, but the renders are too blended-in with the background.
I think that the animation of the word "Pokecenter" is more distracting than appealing.

Also, it's quite large.
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Post by raquaza Sun Jul 11, 2010 10:43 am

It`s nice, but i think u should make the colour of the backround grey.
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Post by Naruto Uzamaki Sun Jul 11, 2010 12:05 pm

It's okay but u cant really see Darkarai the background should be a different color
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Post by KoolAid Sun Jul 11, 2010 12:36 pm

Its pretty cool, but as adox said the animation is distracting and to me unneccessary. Try to make it smaller as well.
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Post by Charizard98 Mon Jul 12, 2010 6:21 am

1. It's Big, Alright.
2. Darkrai Blends in the Backgound.
3. Yup, the text seems distracting.
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Post by adoxography Mon Jul 12, 2010 6:25 am

Guys, do you really need to repeat the same exact things that have already been said?
If you're going to provide feedback, give a new perspective.

Thanks.
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Post by KoolAid Mon Jul 12, 2010 10:51 am

Theres some white on the render of arceus, try a different render
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Post by Ichimarunico Mon Jul 12, 2010 11:58 am

itachi64 wrote:Theres some white on the render of arceus, try a different render
I think that's an intentional effect.
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Post by adoxography Mon Jul 12, 2010 12:00 pm

Ichimarunico wrote:
itachi64 wrote:Theres some white on the render of arceus, try a different render
I think that's an intentional effect.

No, I see what Itachi's talking about. The little white dots of distortion around the image don't seem intentional to me. It looks like the glow surrounding the Arceus and Darkrai is intentional, though.
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Post by Ichimarunico Mon Jul 12, 2010 12:01 pm

adoxography wrote:
Ichimarunico wrote:
itachi64 wrote:Theres some white on the render of arceus, try a different render
I think that's an intentional effect.

No, I see what Itachi's talking about. The little white dots of distortion around the image don't seem intentional to me. It looks like the glow surrounding the Arceus and Darkrai is intentional, though.
I see them, too, I just thought they were supposed to go with the streaks that look like beams of energy. I thought it was all like a tie-in to the background kind of deal.
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